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*Coffin* Vampyre Blood ~Your HuckleBurried~ |
She was the most beautiful young woman in all of the land.
Her name was Acura, she had soft silky white skin, long flowing black hair which went down to her waist, lips like red-wine petals, and hypnotic green eyes that could melt any fellows heart. She was perfect, except for the fact that she was "dead".
She would only be seen at night, as she made herself known in local taverns looking to quench her thirst.
Acura was once a mortal but lived a very unhappy life. She was married to an abusive husband who controlled and beat her as it gave him a sense of power, so she turned to "cutting" herself as to rebel from her lack of confidence.
One night as she walked the lonely streets of depression, she came upon a tall shadowy man dressed in all black and wearing a cloak. He echoed the words "join us" as his unsightly presense seemed to know of her turmoil. He dashed at her and struck his sharp teeth into her milk white neck.
Acura felt her life slip away...
She awoke in the town park as she staggered to her feet still shaking but no longer did she feel earthly pain. She found her way home and when she entered the front door her husband was waiting for her with the belt.
He slammed her up against the wall, knocking pictures to the ground. He struck at her repeatedly, Acura grabbed him by the throat with one hand, sinking her long finger-nails in and lifted him towards the celling!...She *Snapped his neck and then drank from his blood!
After that Acura would bring victims home with her that she would meet on her nightly outings. She new this was wrong even in her evil hatered state of mind. but she could not stop, it became an addiction.
However one night she had enough of *coffin* Vampyre blood... she fell to the ground in bloody tears and denounced Satan and what she had become.
(they say the only way to kill a vampyre is with a wooden stake, or daylight, perhaps holy water, or garlic). But Acura stood tall as she turned to the Lord to ask forgiveness!
...She felt the need to thrive on human blood NO MORE.
She made her way to the local church where a man stood outside wearing all white and a long sparkling coat with gold sash, he was holding a glorious brightly lit cane. She stopped and the man reached his hand out to her with a smile, "we've" been waiting for you Acura" he said in a friendly voice although without speaking. Acura began to weep tears of love and wholeness as she took his hand and she felt the curse lift away...
...The man then pointed beyond the peaceful church to a greater light..."THE LIGHT"...and to heavens gates they went through.
(the end)
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| Alias | Date | Reply |
| ky_bluebird |
4/28/2005 5:21:00 PM |
Oh! My YHB Brother,,, This one was Spooky, Gave me shivers!!!!!...Keep Writing, Your Stories are Great!!!!...**Hugs**....T/C |
| *Boogerlicious* |
4/28/2005 5:32:00 PM |
Great story..Love the name Acura and the title ;) |
| Your Huckleberry |
4/28/2005 5:45:00 PM |
Thanx soo much for the kind replies!... the moral of the story is no matter how bad things may get, if you turn to the Lord he'll wash away that endless pit....HugZ |
| Hagatha |
4/28/2005 7:00:00 PM |
Oh Man! Awesome story and "loved" the moral, I like the name Acura too --- pretty and unusual. |
| *MK* aka: MoonRuler |
4/28/2005 7:55:00 PM |
Acura...isnt that a car shop?? LOL Anyhow, nice post! Loves ya! ----LOOK! ITS THA |
| esp chick |
4/28/2005 9:34:00 PM |
oh bubby boo ,you out done yourself again ,i love reading your scarey tales ,i love this,because it shows how we are forgiven and loved by our father above .....i love vampires stories too,,,,thanks for this great poems huggs 'sissy boo |
| esp chick |
4/28/2005 9:40:00 PM |
oh bubby boo ,you out done yourself again ,i love reading your scarey tales ,i love this,because it shows how we are forgiven and loved by our father above .....i love vampires stories too,,,,thanks for this great poems huggs 'sissy boo |
| Your Huckleberry |
4/29/2005 12:14:00 PM |
I thank thee for reading, as Acura sees no longer bleeding. Her heart and soul at one, "no longer grieving", she was saved by faith and by believing...HuGZ |
| Boredness |
5/2/2005 9:00:00 PM |
cool~princess krystal~ |
| Boredness |
5/2/2005 9:01:00 PM |
cool~princess krystal~ |
| Boredness |
5/2/2005 9:01:00 PM |
oops sry for postin twice~princess krystal~
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